All Comments on 'A Knock at the Door'

Interesting story. I enjoyed reading it & I hope you will write more parts to this story.

He never had a chance. As she said, "You can't escape me. You know it and I know it." He hadn't the strength to fight her.

Where is this going and what will happen? I cant wait to read more of their story. What has and will happen to them.

Damn! That ending was intense! I hope there is more to come that really whetted my appetite for more! Excellent work!

if he were convicted of raping his daughter. This is really a sad story. Well done and well written.

It is a disagreeable subject but I read the story because I like the author's other work. The low grade on this one is way off because it is extremely well executed and is bitter sweet. It tells me that the collective we, here does not know how to appreciate talent!

... maybe I should have given it 5. It was deep yet concise with an interesting twist while giving a different slant on a tough subject. I should have made it 5.

Reads like the prologue for a long suicide note.

And rather grim, but all the same, five stars, if only for how much this disturbs me.

One of the better, more disturbing stories I've read here. Well written and well conceived. Kudos to you. The score should be much higher.

They say that men are xtronger, "They" are so very very wrong. The female of the species can generally easily manipulate the male, especially the daughters their fathers.

And all too real. He is doomed to repeat the mistakes of the past....

He needs to report it or video when she comes back.

Wonder how the relationship has been between daughter who seduced Dad and the mother that reported it? He needs to get the hell out of Dodge.

Well that was disturbing, kid seduces her dad, gets him sent to prison for 8 years where he was brutalized and then wants to start their relationship again after all the pain and suffering he went through.

Great writing! Very intense, very real, very graphic.

FlynnTaggart: That isn't fair. It wasn't the daughter who turned him in; it was the mother. She (the daughter) also makes it clear that she is exceedingly unhappy about the way he has suffered. I won't deny she seems a bit selfish -- both before and now she's going to push him until she gets what she wants, regardless of his objections -- but it's also pretty clear that she intends to do what she can to repair the damage.

Anonymous, just before that: The daughter's statement on that subject is "We don't get along now. I don't speak with her much." Seems pretty clear to me.

LilacQueen15: I was wondering why, but then I realized he probably needs to protect himself against a charge that he's violating a restraining order. She really ought to go to court to have any such order revoked, which she can do, assuming the implication that she is now of age is accurate.

Totally different and a very good story. Interesting circumstances 5 stars.

Bill S.

What kind of twisted mind can write a story as fucked up as this one. Author, yes this is fiction but you better see a "shrink" as soon as possible. Cripes!!

Excellent!

Tragic and confusing.

When you are destroyed and you admit it.

How do you recover?

Not every case is a biblical miracle.