All Comments on 'A Cold and HOT Halloween!'

by PrincessJezebel

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AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
Great--

I liked your wierd idea and the way you put it out there. I love offbeat thinking and I think you did a wonderful job. Thank you very much! It really struck me as just right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well-written and....

....very entertaining.-pistolpackinpete

awakynawakynover 14 years ago
excuse me...

This is superb and not a bit weird.

Especially if you realize that Willa Cather wrote the first American sex on train stories...

in the 19teens.

Inventive and new? Absolutely.

The prose here is sharp and clean, without missing an emotional beat. The story is creative bdsm without being crude and abusive. I'd say that's fuking refreshing! And hot.

I'm hooked.

More, darlin??

jonmartin22jonmartin22about 14 years ago
nice!

Great short story!

lustybardlustybardalmost 14 years ago
intriguing ...

very nice ... keep writing and sharing!

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

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Top Shelf Writing!

11/10!!!!!

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