All Comments on 'Punished by Parents-in-Law Ch. 04'

Alfa- you are amazing... I am so hard! Kym's humiliation just keeps growing (like something here!)... Your psychological touches really get to me! Even catching she started wanting to clean at her own house, little things like that. But the missing clothes, and humiliation of being seen by the others (after waiting all day for the call..) OMG!!! More!!!

This was going beyond boundaries. They said they would keep it between those three. I don't think they should have involved just anyone; there's no telling who the visitors would mention it to(if they are worried about social reputation.) This makes it seem so unrealistic. I hate it when a story doesn't stay consistent. It was pretty good until then.

If you are going to write erotica, at least get your basic anatomy right. It is impossible to smack someone on the vagina as it is completely internal. I assume you meant vulva. This is as basic an error as confusing penis and scrotum.