All Comments on 'Pregnant Desire Ch. 02'

This has the theme of a really nice story, however you should know how long a trimester is before you say that you are only six or seven weeks along. In the last part you should resume rather that presume. The meanings of these words are miles apart. There are other glaring errors which you should correct.

Just musing, h/w going in different directions. She's got a lover and he's on the brink (if not actually) her being lost to him. Something that will come one way or another to be dealt with, and resulting condequences.