All Comments on 'A Sexy New Year Eve'

I hope you'll continue writing about them and see where your mind takes them. I think he really is fond of her. I hope to see a Valentine day story about them.

Too distracted by the lack of grammatical rules (take a look at how language is structured) to be carried away into horniness. Stilted language ... pick up a good grammar manual and go from there.

Wrongly capitalized words. Also, the clit does not "expel juices". Sorry.

There is nothing wrong with your story. Keep writing please.