by Galloglaich
i know its tough but dont stop because this is a fucking awesome story series. i cant wait till we find out what jacks becoming because im assuming thats what happening, what with him looking paler, losing blood and then drinking demonic blood. fuck, im excited! you do good work and even though you think its tough, you have a talent for it.
Thank you for your continued good work for our entertainment. And i have written a few stories, but i'm certainly not as good as you. Plus, i couldn't put as much effort as you do into it to put out a series. Thank you again!
I appreciate all the hard work you are putting into this series. You imagination is endless. I'm really enjoying this story.
Your story is becoming quite epic, almost on the level of Maneyeyedhydra's "Succubus Summoning" series. Hopefully though you can give our hero some proper loving soon. I much prefer some clean, pleasurable succubus sex to all the gory demon sex we've been subjected to lately. Heck maybe he could even get a chance again to have sex with someone he actually WANTS to have sex with (preferably Elassa after all the tenderhearted, loving revelations she has had lately). Hopefully his transformation will reach a point soon where he'll be able to protect himself a bit more from the more violent beauties. At least now Jack knows that he can avoid Anathane hurting him much if he takes initiative.
This is probable one of the best stories I have read in a while I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. :)
dont know what else can be said for it. its a great series, and it's showing all the promise that i hoped it would. keep writing and i'll keep reading. great job
This is definitely a different take for demons, But Da-ammn, I sure am liking it.
POOR ANTHONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A/N: Stop for a moment and receive my utmost admiration if you've written anything for this site. Gods, this is the toughest hobby I've ever committed myself to.
I don't know where you are going but the trip is far far out. You have some imagination and I am holding on for dear life to find out what your destination is! Lynn
Hang in there it is tough but you will feel satisfaction and pride when your stories get over 1 thousand+ views and loads of people kind tiger stories. It is hard to keep writing the stories as a writer myself I empathise with you but it'll be worth it for you in the end.
i,ve been reading from chapter 1 to here in the last couple of hours, and i can just say wow, if this was a book i would buy it, sucker for romance and supernatural, great job, and i hope to see many more stories after i finish this one.
Still doing very well; hope that can keep going till u get an end that will make u happy. Lyn
You really should publish this story! Other than varies typos (I'm a grammar Nazi lol) it is one of my favorite stories ever. I'm so jealous, I'm struggling myself with my own stories and I keep hitting writer's block. You have my utmost respect for such an awesome story! I love it so much!