All Comments on 'A Night at McHooligans'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh ehhh!!!!!!

Phil is back!!! Thanks a lot. It only took FOREVER!!! LOVE IT. More please!!!!!

Dmitry USA

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
yessssssssssssssssss

another great story with some of my favorite characters . . . and I know it is fucked up to say it, but I am glad it was Rosa and not Verde with them . . Rosa fit since she is a wild child type . . and the ending . . that was great, no other way to say it . . sometimes revenge IS well deserved

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it

Your stories are without a doubt, the best on this site. It was great to see characters from your other stories again and I can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WhooHoo! Return Of Phil

Phil has returned and graced us with his presence once more! An excellent story, as usual! The quality of your stories never disappoints i must say! Only thing i think the audience would request is some backfill stories on the others -- i thought Phil was the master of only 2 (if that) not the entire 'family' (since he originally summoned verde...) Would definitely like to see Verde as well. I was originally going to ask you to write a story with Nyte in it (something like Nyte School..let imagination run wild), but i see you have a halloween story with her in it -- which was very very nice btw!

AJ_WatsonAJ_Watsonover 14 years ago
Great as ever

Good to see Phil and Rosa once again<BR><BR>

I run out of things to say about your writing. Most everything you post is well written and hot with excellent wry humour. No exception here<BR><BR>

One thing that did strike me with this one was the understated but powerful ending. Really quite haunting. Plus, everyone loves a rage demon ;-)<BR><BR>

My thanks once again for sharing the excellent writing with us all

lwolf80lwolf80over 14 years ago
Great Story

Another Great chapter it's nice to see phil Back. Will we see Verde and the rest of the group soon?

funkyhatfunkyhatover 14 years ago
WOWSERS!

Awesome...simply awesome.

ctemplectempleover 14 years ago
Well done!

Excellent piece of writing, scary and sexy

j1969j1969over 13 years ago
Good read

I think this authors work is definitely promising.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Carny was a riot!

OK, Carny? Hilarious! What an incredible character, and so funny!

And so much for being her Master, Rosa let Phil get his ass beat!

And what's so sexy about watching your girl -granted she's succubus- getting gang fucked/raped by a train of dicks in every hole like some cheap brass? And then fucking her after in a room full of human slaughter house gore? Hello, Sloppy Twelfths! Yeah, not sexy.

Phil didn't even give her shit for getting his ass kicked and nearly killed!

I think you sometimes get too carried away with the sex part (especially the spectacle of it) to the detriment of the story.

frosty_hore8frosty_hore8about 13 years ago
excellent.....

.... loved the description, thought it was the intro to a joke ;0)

will have to search for more tales of these characters. am sure they will be just as entertaining. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Delightful

I really enjoyed this story. The characters were all lovely in their own way.

PrevertOnePrevertOnealmost 13 years ago
Damn and damned!

How good was this? Damn near publishable. Magazine or horror anthology publishable :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Its not as naughty as the ones i casually read but the story sure is something to rate twice than what is allowed

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More of the entries?

Hey anyone have a list of all the other stories with phil and rosa in them, i found this by accedent after reading "Succubuss Sommoning 101-202" i'm wondering about any other stories of this series. e-mail me at TheDarkRaven13L12@yahoo.com if you know any other stories of the series. PLZ!!!!!!!!

weddressweddressalmost 11 years ago
amazing, looking foward

Hello,

Finished your succubus summoning series 100 and 200, and loved it. love the parody of Harry Potter and beyond, and incredible sex with it. glad I started there so I better understood Phil and Rosa together. Looking forward to reading all your stories, and it will be a happy while. And have to give you extreme credit for making the word "vagina" come across as sexy in suc summon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved your story!

I have always been a fan of Phil,Rose,Verde and the gang,and now Carny! I'm quite intrigued with him,i sure hope he makes it into some more of your stories,he's a very good character

lakutettigalakutettigaover 10 years ago
LOVE YOUR STUFF

FUCKING AWESOME SUCCUBUS FUCKING RULE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Cool premise.

Love the idea of the story series. can't wait to find out what happens to phil in the summoning series too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
fucking good...

i read this ages ago, forgot how good it was.. MEH you rock mate!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Grossly erotic

I would love to see this as a twilight-zone episode (but in gore filled color). If Rod Sterling had the tech and could afford the special effects he would have loved to do something like this. Rosa the succubus unchained was both wonderful and horrible, as was intended, thank you for an entertaining tale.

HPMorganHPMorganover 5 years ago

I love seeing Phil and Co in action! TY!

rattrainrattrainalmost 3 years ago

Imagining Phil trying to focus on fucking Rosa while he gets distracted by blood and limbs flying around is hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Payback's a bitch...

Well done.

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