All Comments on 'Daddy Finally Does Step Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
No b/s

Straight to the point and very good . Bring on part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
No Quotes

You didn't use quotations for character dialogue. Laziness is what it is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
keep going

Very straight to the point - cant wait to read next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
dad does stepdaughter

my stepdaughter lo9oks so sexy i want her to wank me onto her taught belly

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hot

i want my father to fuck me in my sleep so if i wake up and end up enjoying it i can call it rape

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Do it again Sam

Do it again, but get her to wear a nice pair of tight navy blue gym knickers - they should turn you on like mad when you struggle to get it inside her

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Lame. Very lame.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 7 years ago
Amateur

This sounds like it was written by a real amateur. Where's the " " around the conversation? Too rushed; not enough details about the characters; just plain too amateur. Better luck next time.

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog11 months ago

Not enough build-up. I like the story line mainly because I have fantasies of my 38 year old stepdaughter. Mostly the story was too short. You probably should have combined all parts into one. I'll still give you 5 stars for the idea. Lacks creativity though. I think most of us are looking for something a little bit different.

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