All Comments on 'BunkBed'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
DOUBLE YIKES!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
what rock

Did this turd roll out from under.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
werid

wow that is werid but hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
like

would like to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Poor Guy

Not even married yet, and a cuckold already. Hope Dave goes right on off with the girlfriend permanantly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Another wimpy boy story!

pusillanimous guy story hehe

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
Boy, what an original theme....

...I love how the women never have a choice in the matter yet they always seem to go right off on it.

DaviBlackDaviBlackover 14 years ago
Great would love to read more!

Awesome story. Super hot, and I like the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Creative

Thanks for something original - much better than the vast majority of stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
just wouldnt marry her

if she is that easy of a slut she isnt wife material

i would just enjoy fucking her then let her go

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow...

I think this has become my number one fantasy now -.- Dammit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
☆☆☆☆☆- [(5-) 4.55/5.0 = 91% = A] A brilliantly conceived scenario. A well crafted story. More realistic than some people can imagine

The story is EROTIC.

Sharon's boyfriend had a very strong, albeit dormant, voyeur side, of which he was not aware.

He adores Sharon's body; looking & touching her body takes him to cloud number nine each time without fail.

Her decision to go to the upper bed shook her boyfriend in a substantial, profound way. His voyeur side woke up at that moment & took over his will. He stays on his bunk, mesmerized, paralyzed. A part of his mind knows he is supposed to put a stop to what's unfolding on the other bunk. But he is like a rabbit caught in head lights...

In my book, the story's got a happy ending.

Sharon is a keeper!!!

Dave is a lucky mother fucker.

Adam RightmannAdam Rightmannover 6 years ago
Very hot and real

I could see this happening, if things had been different in college.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent!

I love this story! If I could edit it a little, I'd change it so that, as the girlfriend and Dave take their underwear off, they toss it on the boyfriend underneath, first her bra, then her panties, then finally his boxer shorts, which land right on the boyfriend's face.

Maybe at the end, the girlfriend, waking up with her boyfriend next to her and talking about the night before, starts fondling him and stroking his cock, and then seductively asks him if they can break up temporarily so she can date Dave instead.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

she just wanted an excuse

EdandMarieEdandMarieover 1 year ago
Sequel

Would love to see this become a series with the situation escalate.

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