All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 04'

I just love this story! I really hope they end up together. Love the name Isla!

Please update soon!

are only children playing here ? or are all adults mentally challenged in this story? I guess even 12year old would be able to put their emotions into words and teenies in their full hormone turmoil are able to make a difference between love and lust. we also are not living in good old england of the Victorian era. when should this story take place or where fairyland? never heard of the different possibilities of contraception or are you also one of the so educated people who believes, if fuck just standing you can't get pregnant? please make them normal human beeings, give them all an IQ of 100 so they all able to fasten one's shoes, give them some vitamins so they don't fall into depressions cause they only drink tea and finally let them do some sports so they can loose their bad thoughts and agressions so they don't have to kill or harm each other. that's my deal. I read the 4 chapters in a row and I make you another deal I stop it right now.

Loved the way it read, forget the first idiots comments! Please finish the story. I really like the way there is a story not just sex. I only read stories that have some interest other than just thrusting.

I really, really love this story. I just found it, and read all 4 chapters at once. I like a romance story with a bit of conflict and a happy ending. Please let there be a happy ending. :) As for the nasty comment, don't listen to them. I think it is funny how they are being so condescending to your story writing, when they can't even spell or use grammar. Please keep writing this story. I can hardly wait for the next post!!

Great Update...I love these two.

Come on, you are killing me here! I keep checking for updates..please don't make me wait any longer! :-)

I really liked this story.

I wished that you could finish it.

Please update!!!

I really really like this story! Not just like it's love! Please don't leave the story hanging! Please update soon!

... to check to see if a story is complete before i start reading? lol. please don't leave us in suspense too long! great story!

I usually check to see if a story is complete before I read it because it's hell waiting for the next chapters.....:D

This is such a good story, please finish

Are you going to continue ? I think the story is great !

This cannot be the end... how cruel

This deserves a high rating but never ending the series kills it.

Why do people not finish writing these stories??? The basis of the story was good but too many threads were introduced but not fully explained.

am not annoyed,

just saddened & disappointed , that the Author left it at this point.

i suggest we all send the Author Positive & Polite feedback ,asking for

a continuation of this tale.

very moving story.

accomplished something rarely seen on Lit . & then walked away from it.

nearly 5 years since the Author posted it here .

30 months since they last added any other storys .

xxxhugsxxx

First, to the previous anon, best implore ever.

Second, and to the reason I'm on anon myself, sometimes life gets really all the way up in the way. Just strolls on the dancefloor with breath like a whole eight cans of orca shit and chases you all night trying to buy you a drink and completely jacking up the flow. Metaphorically, of course. Cause that would never happen in real life. ENNYway, all that to say while I'm hanging on and getting a bit peeved as well that this story hasn't been updated, it's understandable. Life sometimes. Hopefully our author is alright, and the characters will return soon to pick up where they hav us hanging.

Sorry to see you didn't finish the story. It was good up to this point.

I would have given you 5 star with many pluses if you had only finished the damn story. I HATE it when a author pulls this kind of crap!!!!!!!!

READER BEWARE!

Another unfinished story,,, why why why