JPB, you DO have a knack for unconventional stories! This one is thoroughly amusing.
-- KK in Texas
I just loved this well written story, you could just imagine the main character's mind working overtime on what was happening or seemed to be.
The story really kept my attention and you have a real good sense of wit.
Kinda thought that was where it was going but still nice.
Thanks for sharing.
One of your best!
I would have found out when I busted out his car window with the bat, but thats just me. Good story, bob.
Just loved it, despite guessing what may have been, I was still hooked to the end.
Like always when I see you are the authur it's a pleasurable read!
This same basic plot has been done a time or two before, to good effect, and I had it pegged about a third of the way through. Still, very skillfully - and wittily - done by Bob. I've said this before, but Bob can be hit and miss with his stories; When he hits, though, he usually hits it a mile.
Very well done and a complete surprise to me. This is not your usually type of story and I enjoyed it very much. Good job and thanks for your hard work.
I remain your fan
at least, of those I have read.
Loved the story line
Is Kelly having a threesome with Kevin AND Brian??
VERY good. I laughed my ass off!!!
Very funny ending. lol
a very nice twist. Great story!
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