All Comments on 'Wife Re-Trains Her Husband!'

....Milli Vanilli of literotica.

Didn't like this at all.

Better classed as BDSM

If you're into BDSM with Femdom, then this is a nice fantasy I suppose. The writing needs to be improved. Improper use of the words "to" and "too" along with other grammatical errors interfere with the flow of the story. And one last thing -- some enema training would have been appropriate -- Tim had not gotten to do a BM in more than two days, and without a clean-out, the strap-on session would have been rather smelly and messy, a pretty big turn-off no matter how much Nancy and Samantha might have enjoyed dominating Tim.

Outstanding story. How about a follow up, maybe cuckolding him or feminizing too.

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!

Well I liked it just fine... wow!!

wife. Nancy, the only thing I can say is two can play the same game, so watch out or you might find yourself strapped to the bed with your nipples and clit pierced for starters. Then will come the controling drugs where you will have to turn tricks to get a fix. Remember, what was good for the goose can be good for the gander, but don't lose sleep over it because if it happenes, it happens.

Sweet Dreams, lol

Sick mindless sluts. I hope she sleep with one eye opened after she release him.

the is nothing more entertaining to read about than the mental and physacal destruction of a abusive husband and or father but seriously she was far to nice to him, he didnt suffer NEARLY enough in this story

This story excited me very much. Yes, i agree with the commenter that an enema scene should have been included to clean him out, but still a good story. Emotion and erotic i felt satisfied, but logic asked what happens then? Was he just a fuck toy for them? Did they follow up with the theme of him being fucked or milked? Please follow this with the next chapter. :)

This story excited me very much. Yes, i agree with the commenter that an enema scene should have been included to clean him out, but still a good story. Emotion and erotic i felt satisfied, but logic asked what happens then? Was he just a fuck toy for them? Did they follow up with the theme of him being fucked or milked? Please follow this with the next chapter. :)

Great story and I agree with the earlier that his humiliation should continue and he be feminised

The writing was horrible! Couldn't even get through all of it and this is the kind of porn I really like! You desperatly need someone to edit this for you.

Also you said that he was a "mans man" too many times.

I loved this. Nancy is exactly the wife/Mistress I wish I had. I am divorced and looking for such a wife/Mistress. I of course would not fight the transformation. Indeed, I would love it. However my doctors are telling me that for medical reasons I cannot take female hormones. Sad for me.

Bobbieslut2

Plus I like payback. For those reasons, I gave it a 5.

yes thewre are three plots or flops on this site a wife makiing the husband a bitch or worse. a guy making him a woman by fucking and cumming in his boy pussy by any name it is still an asshole and giving him the greatest orgasimn possible and he did not touch his little clitty yeah right. oh dont forget no 3 a son fucking mommy or sister ands falling madley in love with mommy or sister and daddy doing the same. god it dont get no better then this let me go play with my clitty and my boipussy thank you thank

unrealistic story. Told with poor, poor writing style. Call me a bitch, but I like even my smut to be well written. If I wanted lame scripting, I'd watch a porno. The good news is, I bet you could submit this to a porn company and get paid for it lol.

Dispite the complaints from the critics, the revenge and training was entertaining. If you wish to continue writing about this so called man, you can train him and shoot him up intil he cannot get it up anymore and he is a sobbing sissy.

He does X - She does X

He's abusive - She's abusive

Old refrain: two wrong do not make a right.

In mental abuse a person can not ever give permission

Hey its a fantasy and a story. I think this story is amazing. i love a good truely FORCED FEM story. thank you so much for sharing.

That????????

Awesome story, exactly my taste! Give them a taste of their own medicine! I only wish Samantha lowered her cum filled cunt onto his face forcing him to ingest his own cum.

Please write more!!

She'd be out the door and served ASAP. Not only would they never be able to trap him like that, he'd be looking to put her and her friend in jail and they'd do time for sure.

And had his abusive sorry ass thrown in jail the first time he hit her.

For the soon to be ex-wife and her friend. Construction guys are a pretty macho bunch. Plus which, they're all strong, given their profession. So the 2 women have zero chance of over powering him and zero chance that he'd accept her actions. Which makes this whole thing a ridiculous waste of time to read.

I wish my wife would fuck me with a girlfriend like that. I so badly need to be fucked hard by a mad bitch who ties me to the bed and yes yes rape s me in the ass with her friend. I think this story rocks.

Does anyone really think after a few days of that bullshit he wouldn't at the very least leave? Certainly he'd never sleep in her presence again, and seeing how her "revenge" is sort of overkill, payback would be a bitch. Now and then I worry that someone reading one of these stories would be so incredibly stupid as to try something like this...I suppose I'd read about the double murder the next day in the paper.......

And put them both in the morgue.

And had them arrested for sodomy and rape. He went to the hospital, had a rape kit and a tox screen done. They had her DNA and the drugs were still in his system. They took him into surgery to repair the his torn sphincter muscle. She was found guilty, especially after Samantha told the Court that Nancy had planned it all in order to get a lighter sentence. Nancy went to prison for 12 years for the illegal drugs, illegal restraint, kidnapping, rape, sodomy, assault and battery. Tim kept all the assets in the divorce since Nancy had been convicted of so many felonies. What? You thought you wrote a decent of believable ending to this pile of crap? I don't think so. No stars for complete and utter garbage.

Kinda kinky but as soon as he got untied he's gone. No respect and no equality = no marriage.

Loved the scenario. WIsh you can add more to this series.

Unless they also gave him a lobotomy,he was probably just biding his time 'til he got loose. Talked about pissed off and vengeful,Nancy and Samantha would rue the day they were born when he got going! Provided that he didn't just torture then kill them,each would be felling his big dick up their asses for days as he bitch-slapped them so hard that their cheekbones shattered.

Nancy thought being hit was bad before she and Samantha pulled their little stunt? Wait 'til she feels Jim's wrath now!

That problem, which exposed Goodhue, is solved by making the girls record everything and this serves to blackmail Tim later.

This can give many more chapters. it seemed me short. Continue, please.

A story of this kind accompanied by illustrations would be great. I find no account of male submission with illustrations. Why?

And I hope they both enjoy the jail time and getting a two by four broken over their heads when they get out.

What a pile of utter crap.

You think you know abuse? Wait until he gets loose.

Nancy and Samantha will NOT get away with that stuff once Tim is untied. They can't keep him drugged all the time and the man has a score to settle. ~ I chose to suspend reality so I could fully enjoy this tale from the Land of Literotica.

nice wank fodder for the accurately named author Freakboy, Not in the slightest bit credible even on a fantasy level.

Reading this shit is bad for your mental health. Yeah I read it, but I'm going to stop.

Guess Nancy is a rapist, worse than Tim hitting her.

Once he got loose, Tim introduced both of those cunts to the joys of female circumcision.

Once free, he had them arrested and filed for a divorce while they sat in jail. Dumb.

It wouldn’t be very sexy if he pees (or shits) in the bed. 2-3 days of being restrained with no bathroom breaks would not be a good look (or smell).

All Tim had to do was Tolerate This torture and abuse till they untied him. Then go get in his truck drive to the emergency room. Tell them he had been raped and drugged by his wife and her friend. Ask to do drug test and call the police. Tim filed charges against his wife and Samantha for rape and forcing drugs in to him. The doctor had give Tim Counter acting drugs, then he divorced the stupid bitch. She won't be out of prison for several years..

As soon as Tim was able to get up off the bed, he grabbed his 9mm out of the nightstand. Then Proceeded to put one round in both his wife and Samantha, then called the cops, to report a rape, and 2 shootings!!

I'm really surprised his wife didn't put his cock in a chastity cage? It was sure a good thing he didn't have go to the bathroom all three days he was tied to the bed....

The writer tried to be erotic, but it just doesn’t work. I won’t go where other commenters went with talk of violence, divorce and prison. But what I don’t get is that the husband is a violent abusive asshole and you let your best friend fuck him thinking that will fix him. Huh?