by hickoryfarmer
I simply loved the mental, emotional, and the psychological themes that were being played out. This story teaches us all a potentially dark lesson as to just, how our love life has become so complicated & why.
Why to bring the heat HickoryFarmer.
Thank-you.
I really, really like the concept of this story. The dialogue has an emotional tone that really draws the reader in. I would like this even more if it were more developed and made into a longer story. If you do more with this I think it could really be something unique to Literotica and even more enjoyable to read.
...too many unanswered questions such as "why does she love hubby"?-or maybe not,maybe it's simply an apologist piece? Your story page intrigues and I will bookmark.
without feeling very sad! If this piece was written from the heart and I can't help but think it was, I am so sorry for you and for myself for feeling the same way but never having the courage to move on!!