All Comments on 'Please Fuck Me'

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Irrumat0rIrrumat0rover 14 years ago
wait, what?

There's no context set up to make sense of the ending, so it's merely frustrating. Very hot up to that point; why punish your reader?

sensuallensensuallenover 14 years ago
intriguing thus far...

Loved it so far, but hope you don't plan to cut the story off there... Chapter 2, please!

SinsiousSirenSinsiousSirenover 14 years ago
Looking for more

Next chapter Please!

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