All Comments on 'Communion'

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
It's rough out there....

....points for at least a different take.

LtirashinLtirashinover 14 years ago
A rather good read.

The only thing that I think could have made it better would have been if the "John" had to wrestle a bit with some innner demons. Nothing like a heroic struggle between good and evil but just enough to make him seem a bit more like a "tortured soul". Other than that, very interesting.

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