by blackbbwlover
I love Black mom stories! The older the women, the better.
horrendous spelling and grammar - "window seal" - like instead of lick and on and on.
"To like your pussy..." confessed Maxwell. "It looks like it's gonna be sweeter than candy y'know."
I think you meant 'lick'.
First off, The drama at the begining was a serious buzz kill. Then I enjoyed the story but the mistakes were too many, maybe you wrote this with frustration on your mind. There are programs such as MS office to help with spelling and grammar. Or even use an editor. I have stories pending and i hope the story line is good as yours, but i use the free editors to help me with the rest. No one is perfect, if writing is your passion then so be it. Be the best writer you can be and prove the "Haters" wrong. good luck.
User beccandaddy
It's not as bad as the previous comments let on it is. There is some rough spots but all in all it's a good storyline and not too bad. Don't let the naysayers get you down, keep on writing. Thanks
It is a great start, now go into more detail of them in a 69 position and cumming in each others mouths. How about Maxwell fucking mom and cumming into her when she is in furtile time of month. Does she get pregnant ? I would personally love to 69 with this bbbw. Keep writing these stories.
Incest isn't about skin color. Its about sucking and fucking between close relatives. Skin color has nothing to do with incest thus you by bringing skin color into the equation is in itself RACEST!
@ vietvet - Meant to saw Racist which she isn't.
Incest has to do with sex between close family members. Skin color just adds more detail.
good work BLACKBBWLOVER
I love ALL of your stories . PLEASE keep writing . You are RIGHT there aren't enough black incest stories on here . Please ,please keep writing .
I am glad that you write these stories do you think you could do some black nonconsent incest too those are my fave but there are not very many of them
"Mom, Can I Lick Your Pussy?" The title of this fine story of hot motherfucking encapsulates all the innocent sweetness of a boy shyly lusting after his mommy's cunt. Naturally, all boys are deeply aware of that wonderful exciting hole between their mother's legs--it's the very hole they came into the world from. They yearn to pay a son's tribute to their mother's mommy-hole with their lips and tongue, kissing and smooching and lapping it till mom nearly faints. Of course the boy's fat young prick is harder than it's ever been before, and soon the lad's hot young balls get overheated and he jizzes all over the place. A beautiful moment of the warmest intimacy between a beloved mother and her loving young son.
I love it this what me and my wife's mom she came in my Rome I was jacking of and she sad fuck me just like that she sad I ben standing her for two min so she got on the floor open her pussy I cume in her but she wanted to see me jack of with a ten inch dick in me and she maid me cum
Was alright until he got his come out. I mean, what the fuck, dude? "Can I lick your pussy?" No actual pussy licking, and yet he fucks his mom. You are a shit writer. Go fuck yourself.
I would like my pussy to be licked and pushed on by Maxwell's hard penis. What girl wouldn't let their pussy to b eaten. She sounds do hormey I as a woman would like to fuck her. Good writing
o will look for more of your stories
thinking of starting to write myself. Thanx babe number
Good story. I love sex with black women. I love eating black pussy and fucking it is tremendous. Black women have the most fantastic aureolas. Huge brown circles surrounding their beautiful hard nipples. I could suck and fuck them for hours and hours.
This story made me think that I also was there a d my cock was hard and I wanted to eat her pussy and taste her licking and ni on her big pussy great horny storyline