All Comments on 'Jumping the Fence.'

by vrosej10

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 14 years ago
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A rare example of a tasteful erotic poem, no pun intended. Nicely done.

sir_goodheadsir_goodheadover 14 years ago
just wondering

how those fingers manage to penetrate clothing. Is it a skirt? There is too much ambiguity in this attempt to make it a successful work,in my opinion

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