All Comments on 'First Holiday'

Nice little story. Could have been expanded, perhaps, but nevertheless it was readable. And I LOVE the way you use the word "Knickers" instead of that awful word "panties".

Love the English take on things like this, so sexy

Guess my next vacation will have to be England when I have tea with the Queen and her lovely granddaughters in law. Ahhhh shucks, enjoyable reading even if only one page. Next chapter must be coming and both girls are to become moms.

Short, dirty, erotic and very very effective. Brings back memories in a roundabout sort of way x