All Comments on 'Ghost In The Machine'

That was really good

I liked it

but hahaha

the apple logo bit. That was really funny.

Iono. I liked everything except the ending.

I must find that laptop myself lol :) good story

this was my first "nonhuman" story and i'm surprised at how much i liked it! very sexy.

Wonderful submission, I really enjoyed the detail. Thinking about making a sequel?

Now i want me one of those. Brillliant story way to short though.

I thoroughly enjoyed that :) you have a great idea here I think you should capitalize on it...make a second chapter or perhaps another about a different type of machine.

Come out with night two