All Comments on 'Pole Dancing Christmas'

Very good first story. I enjoyed reading it & I hope you will continue writing more stories like it.

Hot story with a lot of great stuff going on. Great first effort. Hope there is more to come from you.

She goes out to get a present for husband, starts a sexual relationship with someone else, falls in love but its all good cause hubbie gets a woodie. Sorry, but this would be the last present my ex gave me, this is like getting hot pictures taken for hubbie than fucking the photographer, its not about Jake at all, is it.

Not a bad story, but you might want to give an additional read before submitting next time. You switched from 1st person to 3rd person half way through.

I know I would certainly send this Xmas present and the wife back to the North pole. Or lapland where ever they keep such cheating sluts these days.

It was a great concept. I like the idea behind it. it's a little far fetched (but so are most of the stories here), and the rose vibrator seemed cheesy and unnecessary (especially since it wasn't used). I felt like I had seen this all before, and your perspective changed in the middle with no warning. Interrupted me mid stroke.

This story is almost childish at best.

I would've loved to be your dance instructor! You can tell alot about an author from their writings. There is definitely something sensual and erotic about you. If you ever would like another woman's company...you just make me feel so erotic. Love ya girl - me.

The title of my comment says it all!

This made me cum so hard...i love it! Lesbian sex rocks... continue