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This is the End.

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by Anonymous12/06/09

Good job

A clever and effective portrait of a dysfunctional relationship or, possibly, family (or maybe just roommates): a few interpretations are possible, which enriches the poem's complexity.

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by 01/08/10

interesting description

Some wonderful phrases in this. Thanks for the read.

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