by Gethelred
this nowhere now. The story used to have a purpose and it was interesting.... now it seems lost. I hope your next installment will prove me wrong. Gave you 75 because of the quality of the writing and suspended judgement until the next chapter.
Fierce. Intense. Devours the senses. I must admit that I feel a certain apprehensive fear when I read this. Lost in the moment perhaps. A slave to Mark's victim's internal war. The power is elusive to mere words. It is enthralling.
This was an incredible chapter; powerful, brutal, and beautiful. Your descriptions and imagery were amazing, and the internal conflicts were compelling.