All Comments on 'The Cult of the Lamia Ch. 12'

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lancewmlancewmover 14 years ago
Still well written but you seem to be taking

this nowhere now. The story used to have a purpose and it was interesting.... now it seems lost. I hope your next installment will prove me wrong. Gave you 75 because of the quality of the writing and suspended judgement until the next chapter.

LadyGenevieveLadyGenevieveover 13 years ago
Captivating

Fierce. Intense. Devours the senses. I must admit that I feel a certain apprehensive fear when I read this. Lost in the moment perhaps. A slave to Mark's victim's internal war. The power is elusive to mere words. It is enthralling.

Magus_RoninMagus_Roninover 13 years ago
Intense!

This was an incredible chapter; powerful, brutal, and beautiful. Your descriptions and imagery were amazing, and the internal conflicts were compelling.

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