by TroyTower
I don't see anything wrong with the premise, after all a fantasy doesn't have to be totally believable. I like the way you just dive into it, though I wish it had been longer and more detailed.
Next time just leave off the don't believe it... or end with "I'm a true believer... LOL.
The church I was in as a teen/post teen was full of sex. Very horny from the minister on down through the flock. We were a hot fucking, sucking swinging team.
Maybe this group is trying for another Immaculate Conception. After all, God made us "good" with the ablity to fuck and suck several different members of the opposite sex, as well as the same sex, and not all "connections" have to produce offspring in the human race, because we have the power of "choice". I'd love to find this kind of church.... with my low sperm cock.
the whole idea of this story is that love is seen by different groups in different ways. I would not expect to find this kind of church because most churches misundstand sex and love.