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All Comments on 'Oliver Teases His Sister Ch. 04'

by chosak

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good Dialogue

Great dialogue. I love the way your characters banter back and forth. The buildup is great, very romantic.

reader230reader230over 14 years ago
Liked it

Like the build up in their relationship. Can't wait for pt 5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Whatever

Get on with it

bshell47bshell47about 2 years ago

Improving!

Can’t wait for the next chapter

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