by Caribbeanwoman
I am not usually a poetry reader and I found this by accident, My 75 shouldn't be considered as a score, downgrading you, I am no judge of poetry.
I did however enjoy reading this, whats more I will come back again and re-read it at some time in the near future.
I will be looking out for more from you.
Cheers Jack.
Not only poetically arousing but full body mind and emotions arousing, your poem's words of insistent demand perfectly mirrors the demanding sensations one experiences with rising lust—you sound like someone whose body is crying out for satisfaction. Later you sound like someone who is being fucked with utter abandon and then finally you come down with convincing sweet satisfaction in the afterglow of satisfied lust. I'm very seldom aroused by a poem but I got sucked into arousal by this poem. At first I thought is wasn't a poem because it didn't look like one but very soon the cadences began to feel like a poem and thus began my overpowering by your words.
Well done. Now you have to dig deeper and better this.
I could feel your skin, smell your sexy scent, and see your glorious body as I read each phrase. This was a mesmerizing experience!
This is a beautiful, romantic, sensual poem, not crass or degrading. This elevates the beauty and power of sexuality.