All Comments on 'Blessed Are the Poor in Miami Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow

This is a very nice poem. Thank you for writing it.

emma_tateemma_tateover 14 years ago
It IS a nice poem

worthy of comment, which is sad, the state of things, I mean. Okay, honestly, it is cold. Cold but means well. I have read a thousand poems like this, a subject stated well, all spellings correct, punctuation, enjambments, etc, but you left out the emotion. A poem like this should tug, make you tear up, but something missing, didn't pull the trigger. Not one of your best, you tried too hard. Hang in there, It will come to you like it has many times before.

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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A beautiful and sensitive depiction of emotive subject matter -- what I have come to expect of you. Excellent use of imagery, very evocative.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ONE THING THEY CANT SMOTHER

is dreams of now and the future, TK U MLJ LV NV

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