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The person who left the previous comment does not have a clue. The whole point of an S/M relationship as told by Kromedragon is exactly the point. She is a submissive and subs don't fight back unless of course they want to be punished by accident or on purpose. This is simplified of course
The story itself was ok. I would have liked to have seen more buildup with the husband looking on and maybe some interaction with the son and his friends.
Next time you want to leave an ignorant comment, how about leave your name instead of hiding.
Captives are Freed
Very good. This couple have freed their primative urges by the wife's surrender to an alphamale. You'll warrant a "very very good" or "great" depending on future installments.
Interesting premise...
...but would have benefitted from more detail and a lengthier buildup. There are a lot of potentially interesting conflicts and circumstances that could have been explored in more detail.
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