All Comments on 'Now, Where Was I?'

I liked it--not bad for a first story. I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors, but it seemed a little lacking in plot and detail. I think the story could be improved with some information about how they ended up together--did she come to his place? If this was a weekend, did they do it more than once? What are their feelings toward each other afterwards? Was this a one-time fling?

Very good KB.Excellent first effort. I know this isn't your regular genre, but is was quite well done. I really enjoyed it. Really got me going. Looking forward to reading more of your work.