by HornyHubbie
You certainly presented an interesting predicament. I am quite eager to see where this goes. It seems this experiment may just ruin both marriages, but only the writer knows for sure. Excellent job so far.
They should just to the proper thing and end the farce of their marriage their in.
What a great story the wife should have never let her husband touch another woman, but now i think that the two should leave there other halves and be together cuz they found the real thing
The shit is about to hit the fan. Here comes the pain...<EVIL VILLAIN LAUGH>
This is a very hot and sexy story. I am not entirely certain how real Helen's transformation is -- from shy quiet mouse to phone-sexing temptress -- but I love the story.
For those of you who want to bash the story as an adulterous affair -- I can only say: No shit. That's part of the allure... Taking a sexy romp on the naughty and wild side.
Great read !!!
OH YES I CANT STOP THINKING OF WHAT COMEING NEXT I WHAT MORE I NEED MORE I KEP THINKING ITS ME I AM STILL HARD PLASAE KEEP IT CUMING
Thanks for the story, it is really well written - love the twist at the end of this chapter and am looking forward to the next installment.
wow another hot hot hot story!
cannot wait for part4, keep up the great work!!!
.....I really enjoyed your story...please,...on with no.4....great job...
You can't quit now, you owe it to your readers. You done such a great job with stories...1,2,and 3.
How will I know if and when you continue with the next chapter?
shoulders. He is thinking with the head of his dick and that is going to be bad news. Helen in a coniving bitch that is out to get John at the expense of breaking up his marriage. Poor Natasha, the dumb cunt for allowing this to happen in the first place. He should install cameras in the bedroom and record what is actually going on. John is now looking at his secretary differently. I guess the worst thing, John is is comparing Helen to Natasha and telling Helen how much better of a lover she is that Natasha. John is suppose to be a loving husband and father, ha. He is digging a grave for himself. The final straw will be when he is fucking Natasha and calls her Helen.
shoulders. He is thinking with the head of his dick and that is going to be bad news. Helen in a coniving bitch that is out to get John at the expense of breaking up his marriage. Poor Natasha, the dumb cunt for allowing this to happen in the first place. He should install cameras in the bedroom and record what is actually going on. John is now looking at his secretary differently. I guess the worst thing, John is is comparing Helen to Natasha and telling Helen how much better of a lover she is that Natasha. John is suppose to be a loving husband and father, ha. He is digging a grave for himself. The final straw will be when he is fucking Natasha and calls her Helen.
OUTSTANDING job! This installment was even more sexually charged than the last, and that is no small feat. I love how you have John and Helen slipping further into lust with each other, and how Helen seems to be actually trying to get John to want her exclusively. I also loved the hidden camera at the end. I imagine Mike planted it, and considering his previous performance following John and Helen's second tryst might unleash a little pent up rage in a sexual fashion.
I have to admit the visual of Helen in this chapter, high leather boots and soft, velvet gloves on a petite, pale frame is as arousing an image as I can imagine. I don't know what chapter 4 holds (or if it's the last chapter), but can I suggest Helen buying a leather Dom outfit for some future chapter? Nothing says HOT like skin tight leather.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
What an awful story. He's a pig and she is no better. These two deserve eachother for being disgusting human beings.
Its still good but getting just a bit further from being believable
Let us please have a happy ending for these two, their partners were idiots to allow this OR have Helen join Natasha and her husband as members of their household. So, if you have not finished the story in the next chapter how about ending this peaceably?
It is a great story.
This is so like a real life experience that I had many years ago with a friend of my wife. She was already pregnant by her husband and we just got it together in amazing and fantastic love-making. I can relate fully to this story - had me hard for ages.
My wifes friend sent the first chapter to my email. We talked about doing it but could not get over the social stigma of everything. We used to date back in the day but i feel i may be making a trip to her bedroom soon. Very good story. For what its worth i think u got the ball rolling on something me and her have been puting off for 7 years.
Thanks for continuing with a really hot story. I accept it as fantasy and it is very erotic.
In real life, this would not happen medically and I would not consent to best married friends having sex.
But now the oncoming train wreck in the final chapter. We'll see if you can carry the day and finish up in a clever and exciting fashion.
Oh, boy. The proverbial shit hits the fan tomorrow! Excellent writing. Good lustful reading. Cheers!
wow! These stories are incredible! Actually better than the erotica I used to pay a lot of money for on Amazon (Kindle app). The fact that this author actually made us all care about what happens to these characters & their marriages says a lot about the writing & story.
keep on writing them! this is even better than paid porn and paid porn fic!! keen to see where this goes in the next installment. i hope it ends with them ending eachothers marriges and going off together.
Excellent story excellent. When I read that John and Helen had the house to themselves for the evening I thought and I reckoned that Natasha and Mike might sneak in through the back door and spy on the activities but no, it was the old camcorder trick.
You have crafted a masterful story. I can only see doom ahead. I have been in a similar situation and couldn't get myself to stop. The crash was painful, took me 10 years to get over it.
One gripe. When trying to get pregnant one does not masturbate or receive blow jobs because the sperm count decreases dramatically after the first orgasm.
Wow! Again wow! Hard to believe that anything this.bad sparks that reaction. Just a story about low life cheaters.
I'll be interested to see how you weave this tale and which of the possible scenarios you choose.
Great story so far.both love to fuck each other. I think smoke a d Nat should fuck each otherbtoo. Maybe have a foursome too
So,so. It got pretty monotonous in places, and leaving everything hanging at the end sucks.
Oh no, not a camera :l But that was damn hot! A bit repetitive at times, but still great.