by LeCoach
This one belongs in the SHITTY category...the entire time I read, I could not help thinking it was either a 14-year-old trying really hard, or a hillbilly trying harder. Terribly dissapointing...and please...next time you write anything...find an editor before you hit "submit" ;)
Nice little story, with a cute "panties twist} to it. But there certainly looks like there's more to be found! Thanx for the Read.
Ignore the haters. Some people just have a shitty imagination. It got me aroused.