All Comments on 'Lynn and Bobby Ch. 02'

I hung in there with part one, wasn't in love with the story. But this second chapter makes the first chapter sound! I totally recommend read both chapters, read one, don't give up. Chapter two make the whole story worth while. I hope there's a third chapter, can this get any better?

didn't care for how you treated the treated the husband in the first story. didn't want to read this one. glad i did. glad i gave your character's a second chance.

on this chapter. Chuckled throughout the whole story. You did a great job on this chapter. It actually felt good, knowing hubby was the subject of positive debate between two lusty women. Thanks for a good read. ML

chapter 1. - Just dropped by 'cause of the category. Liked it. Chuckled too. Above average writing it is also. Will go read now the other chapter(s) prepared for a rocky ride. Please continue your efforts. Thx.

another brilliant part of this very hot horny story. excellent story awesome. writing. a joy to read keep them cumming

She must really love him so much!

See....she's speaking worse than a sailor in a brothel?

wow great story,

turned upside down & totaly reversed from what i was expecting .

firm believer in equality,whats gd for the goose, is good for the gander :)

funny how all the haters&flamers don't spew the Vitriol when its the guy fckin the Ass off as much pussy as he wants ... but they go absolutely Ape sht , when a wife fcks around ...

anyhow loved the story .. the mis quote , was the only tiny downer , pulled me out of the good place i go when reading your skillfully written stuff, but only momentarily , & then i was buried in it until the end.

dive in , submerge , be absorbed , lose track of time ..

xxxhugsxxx

That chapter was a really boring diversion from the story. The humiliation and cuckolding is fantastic... what's with all of this boring angst discussion?

That's some really boring crap. I skimmed most of it. I'll look at the next chapter to see if this is the trend or if we can get back to the erotica.

great dialogue, both Lynn and the Princess, enough I gave this a 5

and, reading the other comments here, not sure I want to read 1st chapter, tho some of the other chapters one line descriptions have me intrigued enough to dip in