All Comments on 'Loving Stepdaughter'

Very cool - hope there will be mroe :)

thanks

Hope more will follow soon

Spelling, grammar, contextual references all show need for an editor. Don't you have spellcheck?

Made me want to the the stepmother!

More!!!

The basic story line was reasonably well thought and believable (within the believability of porn) but was badly written with its spelling errors, grammer and contextual issues.

The first first issue, spelling, is unforgivable no matter the level of education recieved, USE A SPELL CHECKER.

The last two issues, grammer especially, can be forgiven IF the author is not a native English speaker, and NO English or in fact, ANY language taught as a second language will not convey the all of the nuances that a native speaker has - heck, even natives have problems understanding some of the quirks used in the spoken words of another native from a different part of the same country.

However, this involves the spoken and not the written word.

But, then again, American, British, and Australians don't even spell parts of the language, let alone speak it the same, ignoring the varying accents of course.

Which is an extremely long way of saying write in your native language and find an native speaking editor capable of translating your written text in to the language you desire to have it translated into.