All Comments on 'Swimming Pool'

Pretty lame. Anyone who has ever been to swimming lessons knows this isn't going to happen in the showers where a kid could walk in and see it all. Talk about making stay at home moms sound like morons falling for the our locker room is fancy tour crap. Give us all a break.

Style appears to be situations that have little bearing on reality (or that make sense)...if they are true, I would be wildly surprised. Little to no build up and moves way too fast

I read three of his stories and don't plan on bothering with any others...

This middle age idiot is posting tons of shit for that horrible contest where a few people try to out-asshole each other. Please end that contest. This stuff is terrible!