All Comments on 'Erica's First Striptease'

Good job for a first story. Sometimes dialogue driven stories like this are some of the hottest out there, and your phone sex experience is definitely paying off. Keep going!

It's good to see a first-time writer capturing the fantasy of masturbation so well. I'll bet your phone-sex customers always get off! lol Keep writing, claire. You'll do well here.

~Tori

Great story, especially for a debut. As the comment below mentioned, your phone sex experience is clearly at work here. The storytelling is fast and efficient, and the story is very arousing despite its brevity. Excellent work, and I hope to see more from you, Claire.

That is real hot. I felt like I was there. Keep going babe.

A very HOT little story that got me oozing and oozing... thanks.

Anyone who has ever been to a high class strip club has the fantasy of having a hot sexual experience with a nubile young amateur. Claire made it so real I could feel every sensation. I experienced the same raw climax at the end and look forward to more of your stories.

You captured the raw emotion and vulnerability of your character.

I'm still waiting for my heartbeat to slow back down.

I waited to read this one , glad I did you so have to do an audio of this one!

Very hot ! whiskey65

There's always the fantasy of having your way with a beauty in a club, this guy made it happen. Seriously hot stuff. Well done

dgmartin80

I like the dirty talk and the large spaces, makes for easier reading. Lots of realistic, short conversation. look forward to reading more of your work

I missed this Erica story my first time through the list .

Its every customers fantasy to screw one of those hotties dancing on stage.

You nailed it and the stories that follow are even hotter and if you ain't hard then your dead after reading Claires slutty fantasy's!

I'd love to have Erica give me a lap dance!

Please keep writing your stories are like candy and I so want to go trick or treating. xxx James

Claire Love the Erica stories. Would love to read about her going to a xxx store and buy some naughty outfits for her daddy.

Tim

I would love to see Erica at a strip club! I would go broke! especially if she gave me a lap dance!

A hot story from a VERY hot young woman! my poor laptop will need a good scrubbing one of these days!. Your mix of sweetness and innocence and raw sexual energy is positively intoxicating! i hope there will be an audio story with ERICA someday, Claire.

much love,

david2010

stoptouchinthosemonkees

God it's so hot.I have read it again and again.And the space between the lines is enjoyable>keep updating.

2406

You're so much fun to read! Thanks for writing Claire- you hot little piece of yummy.

A very HOT story that amost made me cum without touching!!

Excellent story! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!!

great story love this new story excellent story love the writing of this one keep them cumming

Great first stripper story and how she wanted her Daddy.

this is one very hot hot story and i would love to see you strip and put on a show like that in person. this got me so hard and i came so much just reading about seeing that performance in person.

I could imagine watching you playing with yourself. I would love to see you stripping for me if that is how good you are.

Claire's sexy story of Erica stripping!

Erotic writing by Claire has me dripping!

Hot literotica! Claire is the one,

Giving her readers a taste of her fun!

Thanks Claire! ;-)

claire sounds so faqntastic and the things she says and does - wow. Lots lots more to cum i hope

Very, very nice!

just started reading the erica series and this story turned me on so much i can't wait to read the next one. in fact i think ill do that right now. i just long to hear about the rest of erica's night.

"My c-cunt..." she gasped, moving her ass cheeks up and down as she held the lips apart. "My cunt...my hot little teenage cunt...please, Daddy...let me masturbate for you...watch your baby girl masturbate, Daddy..."

i couldn't have said it better myself!! Proceed, Princess...with my blessings!! how i would love to see that!!! Those two sentences alone are worth 5 stars!!!!

love, daddy xxxxx

i love you, claire!! you make me want to leave the priesthood!! right after i listen to your confession!!! mmmmmmnnn....xxx

5 stars, Princess Claire!!!

Once again the descriptions in the story had me horny as hell and ready in anticipation. Keep it Cumming! :)

you have a way with words claire. you make me want to have you so baaad.

If you don't read all her stories you are missing out! This one alone i could not finish before getting off and then getting back to reading :)

could you link your stories? for those of us who like them it makes it easier not to miss some. ;)

Erica makes me grunt & moan in a way not very dignified for a grown man.

More please.

Talented writer with such naughty characters who are every mans fantasy

my daddy loves your stories! we would always roleplay to your stories! as for myself, i love your erica stories! i have already read it countless of times and i still get wet! you're the best claire! keep on writing!

Great story, I'd cum by the time I was 3/4 down the page.

Your stories are tightly written... no slack, but you take time to develop your scenarios. Hot words" teenaged vagina, fuckhole.. and of course, cunt. Don't make Erica totally helpless though-- of course, Claire isn't in your audio stories. Thumbs up!

I can see the pink - of your little teenage cunt -when I read or listen to your stories. You have the ability of taking me somewhere I cannot go on my own. What great imagery I get from your words. Keep me excited Claire, because you sure know how to do it....you cute, little teenager.

daddy loves to wank while watching baby finger her cunt and cum for him then talking dirty to him as he wanks then cums on her little cunt

Your work is amazing! The words you use and the whole naughtiness factor are amazing! While I'm reading, I picture you telling me the story in person with your hot accent! Nice work

great little story

Well done. Short and sexy!

Gave it one star because that's the lowest rating I could give it. Please stop writing.

That last comment about give this story ONE star, are you NUTS? These stories about Erica are the hottest on Literotica, my friend!

This story is amazing. Full STOP.