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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Minor lapses

Pray or prey? Twice 'you' when it should be 'him'. Do proofread. Nice idea. And definitely a spark, yes.

rhyseslilslutrhyseslilslutabout 14 years ago
wow

you are an amazing writer this story was great. keep it up can't wait for the next installment x

~ rhyses slut

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