by yellowhair69
hope you continue to tell us more about these hot families..and want to hear more about family bi..especially dad/son bi with mom as part of it...nothing hotter for women/moms like us..than that scenerio..trust us..we know
M/M action killed the story for me otherwise it was great.
a new tradition on their first night into the family tradition. That's good. The morning should be good also.
I found the big party a bit too much, too many people. I scanned through it. But the rest, with the one family, was extremely exciting to me. Except for a few English errors and misspellings, it was well written and sounded like a lot of fun. I tried a swingers' club a few times, but it wasn't very much fun. I'm single, and it was a bit awkward for me being there alone, and people weren't very friendly. Sometimes, fantasy and fiction are better than real.
I don't like that. If others like that it is their business, not mine. I did quickly go to the end and gave you a good rating, I'm just not into partaking of and reading about men/men. Just not my thing. I do like mother/daughter etc. Thank you for writing.
I personally love the male/male action and wish there was more of it. But I agree there were too many new characters introduced in the party scene and it was impossible to keep up with all of them.