by writerscramp4me
I enjoyed the beginning of your tale, but this isn't a series or even a
story yet. Don't waste our time with such a minimal effort. You started the story alluding to the similarities of the girls, but leave us with little or nothing at the end of the second chapter. Good luck, but I've a feeling this stroy will never see it's end in our lifetime.
Come on... two more chapters... You can do it. One Chapter to fuck Kate, one to fuck her mom. You can do it. It's a good story... Start with an outline: get them home, naked women, fucking all the way, them to Grandma's, naked women, fucking all the way, then a conclusion where the all live happily ever after... fucking all the way. Just like Jingle Bells! Such a nice family story. :)
Excellent beginning to a good-great series!! We need more episodes to further develop and expand on the characters and the story line / plot!! So far, 5 stars!!😎