All Comments on 'Choices'

Enjoyed this story and thought it was well writen and a real turn-on!

your writing was capable of creating very vivid mind pictures in my head and that's what it's all about. I liked the twist in the end as well- icing, as it were. No criticism, just a thank you for a good story. Thank you!

The is a well-written romance story, with a good introduction, careful build-up, and good character development. The love scene brings the chapter to a fitting end, but it is much too short, as is the story in general.