her loving trusting husband has hidden cameras in the house and when she goes out shopping next time her husband will come with a locksmith and change the locks. She will be met in his fdront yard by a process server with the words."You are served" She will call her husband but find his phone has been changed...She will call the police and they will tell her that it is his right. He will come home long enough for her to clear out her things... Perhaps the good father can let her stay in the rectory with him...what n..oh his wife will not like that...let's see her worm her way out of this...nyminus
wow that was a very dumb story and a total waste of mine and i believe your time.
Too bad the zero don't go in the minus column. You must have dug deep in the barel for this one.
Yes Lori is a slut that fact is apparent but what's the point. It could be the milkman, mailman, salesman, anyman with a cock, so what is the point of the story. To short and not good.
Short, sweet and bang on the nail.
I'd suggest striking that first sentence, and go into luscious details about her sipping coffee, getting up, fixing her robe, getting dressed, stretch it out, taunt us, tease us... maybe mention the husband somewhere in the middle, or even save it for the end... maybe the Father asks how Lori's husband is doing? The Father at the end is one fine oomph. Add the husband there and you get a double oomph. Glad to see you out and about.
I just want to know if she thinks she is saving her soul by fucking the good father. Good story, fast moving and to the point.Thanks
I fail to understand the people who enter comments trying to fix, change, explain, or expand a story that had no life from the beginning. Let the dead rest in peace.
The comment about "sunday morning" was a give-away and telegraphed the semi-surprise ending.
...telegraph. Sure you can write. So do it.And the whining bio looks pretty haughty.
This worked fine for me. A little shorter than I would have ideally liked, but still good. Ignore the negative comments, you tend to get them in this category.
I’m pleased that ‘Father’ is getting some good sex for normally, in ‘Loving Wives’ tales, it’s his shy reserved wife that gets such fun.
Pretty good read i feel like i was a "fly on the wall"
with all the good detail, might have said more about the
heels.But thats for next week.
So what if it was a man of the cloth, his loins ache for sex as well as the milkmans right? "Never on a sunday?"
were you listening to Connie Frances?"
Thumbs up on a damn good story, gotta go an read your other stories.
"Are your heels safe from the,"Shoeslayer?"
I get a chuckle out of readers who suggest to the author how she should have written her story and to ignore the negative comments. The author wrote it her way and I'm sure she is quiet capable of ignoring any comment she chooses. I assume the point of the story is that she has sex with a priest, didn't realize they liked women. Excuse my ignorance, but what's that pic on your bio? Thanks for the read. ML
The pic on my bio is one of my paintings. It's abstract expressionism, as much of my art is.
Perhaps Steve can come home early on day and send them on to meet their maker, even if it's a short stay, hell is calling. Seriously, slut wives are a turn off, just don't understand why they are married, too lazy to work?
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