All Comments on 'Not So Plain'

by hickoryfarmer

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2Xwidderwoman2Xwidderwomanover 14 years ago
Loved it, laughed and read it again

It was wonderful. The twist at the end had me laughing out loud. Very good job, entertaining and kept my attention until the last word.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 14 years ago
Not a writing style I usually go for, but

this soon had me captured! Beautiful twist at the end: nobody could have seen that coming!

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 14 years ago
Funny...

I almost quit reading after the first two or three sentences. But I'm sure glad that I didn't as I found it quite funny at times with many erotic passages. Thanks.

fridayamfridayamover 14 years ago
A hoot

Lovely story, J and a very nice little twist. Hot too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Read. it all!

Great and , hot datails and an amaZing surprise at the end! Loved this story! Thanks

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