by Sean Renaud
As with all good stories, they seem to end too fast. Just as you get into the sexual affair, it's over. Hopefully the author will write about what happened the next morning, and give us some more of the sex that was started. Thanks
but not much build up to it, and no follow up so far.... will there be a chapter 2?
IT WAS TO SHORT, NOT ENOUGH DETAILS, STORY LINE WAS OK. YOU HAVE A LOT TO WORK WITH. DONE WASTE A GOOD STORY , YOU COULD MAYBE MAKE IT GREAT. GOOD LUCK.........LAROC OF AGES
Good start, looks like you put mofe effort in describing the video games than the kinky action and it fell apart in the end.
You rushed the stuff at the end with his mom way too much. Hell with how fast you had him cumming it makes it clear he has to be a virgin. Though being as drunk as he is, he should likely be able to last a little longer then that.
Great concept and grammatically well written. Sex was way to rushed and lacked depth. Please make a part II.
Keep this one going , let us know what happend the next morning.............. good luck
Olen oma purjus ema ka pannund aga kainelt on parem.Kainelt ema paneb alt ülese rõõmuga kaasa.
I did my mom fucked her even knocked her up with my kid in her then comes over saw us both nude before she could say something mom went up to her kissed her fully I walked behind her grabbed her arms mom ripped open her top no bra mom just sucking on my aunts dark nipples then she took off shorts mom told me get ready fuck this hairy cunt cum inside her get your aunt pregnant put my aunt on her back rammed my cock In her cunt then mom put her hairy cunt on her face mom told start licking it my aunt my aunts body was shaking had big orgasm i unloaded in her cunt mom screamed as she orgasmed once we finally wished my aunt she just yelled your son most likely knocked me up mom said to her just be thankful it is your nephew not one of the others.aunt started crying mom told suck it up told her your moving in with us my son planning giving us three kids each mom said you will let him fuck you bareback then mom told her you and I are doing full weekend gangbang with his friends bareback then told her plan on watching you get pregnant from them too