All Comments on 'My Family's Nudist Colony? Ch. 03'

by regularguy13

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alpha635alpha635over 14 years ago
Great

Keep the story going. I wish the chapters were longer, but there still good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start

As others have said, the chapters need to be longer, may i suggest 2 pages, it's long enough to keep people interested but not too long as to make it hard reading

reddbunnzreddbunnzover 14 years ago
Great story.

Finally something worth visiting in Texas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
If only you had split each chapter into thirds

You could have nine chapters done by now.

Ducky7Ducky7over 14 years ago
keep going so far so good

This has a lot of places it can go and we shall see.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
totally silly

please no more trite, silly chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
A REAL nudist knows the rules

A really nudist knows that a man is to cover his cock with a towel should he get an erection. WALTER should have known and said something. This writer is just trying to make it erotic. I AM A NUDIST.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
cute story

i like the tease, and i lake the family. but we need some sex!!

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

What a fun, funny, and sillybstory...just what we need to have entertain us once in a while!!

I am ready for some sex, too, see how the girls interact with mom & dad...THIS IS GONNA BE SO MUCH FUN.

I AM sorry to see how long ago all the comments were made, guess the story has been well-hidden...too bad, it is Sssooo fun!d

**5** Stars...🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡

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