All Comments on 'Momma's Boy'

or was this a deliberate attempt at combining all the cliches of bad story writing in one pass?

a description of your 11 inch cock and hen's egg sized balls filled with a pint or two of cum.

I can only think that the story is something that the author really wants to happen. It is a good sexy and erotic thought. I would hope that it is just the start of a very hot sexual and love affair. I would like to read ore of what happened between the two. Thanks

...this pathetic attempt at writing incest erotica SUCKED!

Seems too easy, A bit short to be really good

I've read almost all of your stories, and pretty much all of them share the same flaw. It's all really hot as you're building up to the big event...then you get to penetration (if that far) and it's all over in a few seconds. Not good in sex, and not good in erotica. There's nothing worse than a fictional premature ejaculater. Draw it out some more, stick in some dialogue, whatever...just keep it going long enough to get some enjoyment out of it, for god's sake...

I like the fact that the boy is experienced in sex, he knows his way around a twat, and it's still his own mother's twat that he's drawn to. Like plenty of sons nowadays, this guy discovers that the best place for his fat young prick is his own mother's mommy-hole, the same wonderful hole he was born out of. His cock's never felt this good, totally enveloped by a mass of warm wet loving mommy-twat. He unloads his young balls and finds that he's shot the biggest load of creamy sperm of his life. A mother's cunt will do that to her boy's big stiff prick.

Make another chapter of it. Has potential for much more.

for the fucked her for 3 hours. YOU should be a porn star!!!