by TechnoCarwash
Wow, this was a hot story. I love incest stories, and lactation is oh-so-hot... you've made this girl very happy!
If I could offer one suggestion: replace the term "vaginal fluids" with something a little less... clinical. It takes away just a bit from the story. Other than that, it's just about perfect! Thanks for sharing with us.
Great. Very, very hot. Oh and I love the the term "vaginal fluids" please don't replace it.
For those of a certain age, this harkens back to 'little nemo' (not the cartoon fish). Look forward to plumbing the depths.
Might there be an as yet unmentioned brother in this plot awaiting to come home from college for holiday break and make them both pregnant?
HOT! Please expand this story. I like the idea of a brother, as well.
was this updated yet? please keep it all women, I don't think adding a male would improve the story. idea of a female cousin is perfect.
Lacto-eroticism doesn't get much better than this.
Mmmmm that was one tasty story! wish i was megan! shes lucky with a hot mother like that ...please continue!
Does Lactoril acually exist? Or some version of it that does the same thing? Because I want a bottle, or a supply... ;)
It made me cum so hard that there was cum on the other side of the room
I really liked this story, and would very much like to see a second part where cousin Sandy joins in on the fun
Your story about your sexcapade was mesmerising....and I was panting when you got down and dirty with your breast-in-kin......KEEP WRITING!!!!!
You should publish the next chapter of this story and please make it longer.
a totally erotic lactation story. when are you planning to write the sequel?
Something about the role reversal of a mother drinking her daughter's milk turns me on immensely. If I could be involved in a threesome with a mother and daughter, both lactating, I would die happy.
why haven't you posted the sequel yet? This was a clever story that desperately needs a sequel involving the cousin.
PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL YO HAVE A GREAT STORY AND IT CAN'T END JUST YET WRITE WHATT WILL HAPPEND WHIT SALLY IN THE MIX
And fantasy. But, we are still taking about the physical body.
Your exaggeration is so over the top you lose credibility.
B cup to G? Multiple bottles of milk within seconds of topical application?
I can't say that I ever had a human milk fetish, but picked this story out on a whim and ended up enjoying it. I agree with rightbank, the idea of human breasts instantly swelling to g cups seemed unrealistic (and horribly painful) and detracted from the story, but perhaps enormous breasts are part of the fetish. I'm also not sure why swelling breasts are any more unrealistic than is Lactoril itself or that anyone would allow unsupervised trials of such a project. I note it's been awhile since you wrote this and so a sequel seems unlikely, but I for one would love to see it.
Your writing had me panting and practically pulling my nipples off my breasts, it is so exciting. When Megan stood before her mother and lovingly unbuttoned her blouse, freed her aching breasts and loving suckled, much to her Moms' delight, I stopped reading and just dreamed.
Only 2 pages????? Write more and longer stories. Don't worry, even those who have never had the pleasures of lactating breasts should be in dreamland of the sensations that occur.
Love your writing and will hope for so much more......
Interesting concept with the experimental cream. The size of their breasts was amusing but did not detract from the hotness of the story. The dialogue was believable and overall, the flow was good. There were times that just as I was really enjoying the story, the author would set me back with dialogue that confused me. I felt this story has/had the potential to be 4 stars with a bit more effort.
Ray (aka Writerotica, retired author; avid reader)
Please write more stories like this. I love the mommy daughter concept with the big tits. Please please please!!!!
Somebody did a rewrite of this story, including a sequel. You can read it here:
archiveofourown.org/works/29356674?view_adult=true&view_full_work=true
HighLumin posted a rewrite/sequel for this:
https://www.literotica.com/s/macy-maddie-and-michaelas-milk