Just plain weird!
...eerily like end of days at least the love is there!
Will the blind man become more of a main character in the story. Is this just the start of her finding out that she wants more sex than she has been getting, and the thought of having another man besides her husband really turns her on. Good start,but left a lot of questions in my mind.Thanks for the post.
Like others have said, this felt incomplete. It was well written and the amount of detail sufficient to paint the picture without getting bogged down, but in those details there felt like there should have been more. Why a blind man? Would the story have been served just as well if it had been a college "kid" who she was "too old for" and taken notice of her? How about a woman, or a "girl"? Some of the details lead you to believe there's more and this posting, standing alone, leaves you hanging...but shows promise.
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