All Comments on '34 Minutes Ch. 02'

I love this story already and it just started...and Tony seemed like the worlds greatest douche from the jump. Keep the chapters coming, I can wait to see what happens between Nicole and Justin.

Another good writer blossoming.

I hope Nicole actually lets Justin think about the idea before she pounces on him. That loser is his best friend and it always turns out bad when a girl tries to get between a guy and his boys. Let Justin choose to be with her. Then he'll have no one to blame when it all goes to sh*t. I'm looking forward to seeing Justin and Nicole together. I like them. Thanks for writing.

I agree with one of the previous comments. I hope she doesn't just pounce on Justin. I also want Tony to feel like damn I fucked up. I like how you write, its real. I look forward to reading what more you have to put up

I'm struggling to understand Nicole's character! Seriously, WTF!? What could she possibly love about a guy who's cheating on her every chance he gets and calls her a "bitch" when she's legitimately pissed. If I were Justin, I would not be quick to get serious about a woman like that unless she figures her sh*t out first.

I have been waiting for you to update this story. You have done a great job and now you have us handing. Please, Please let us know what happens next.

MAN COME ON PLZ UPDATE AND QUICKLY BECAUSE I'M REALLY LIKING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

One she needs to ditch Tony, LOSER. Second I think she and Justin need to hook up on a slow tip. I would love Tony to suffer, and realize what he missed out on. Mabe the best man at thier wedding..LOL. Great strory!

Real talk, I went through the same s*** wit my dude, but my current boyfriend (white) was a good friend of mine instead of my ex... LMAO

I like the pacing of your story, and it seems like you're building to something more than just sex between Justin and Nicole. I'm not sure if you have writer's block, or are just short of time, but I would encourage you to continue.

On the editing side, I noticed not too many people take the extra time to grammar check their stories. I think you have some potential and if you take a little extra time to proofread perhaps you could catch the eye of a publisher. Writing conversationally is fine, but please consider incorporating that style within dialogue instead of prose.

Good luck, and I hope to read more from you.

You gotta countinue this story I love it

I really like the first 2 chapters of this story I hope to see more soon. Thanks for sharing.

Please keep us up-dated. If you writing anymore, let us know

Please finish the story, it is so good.

i really liked the first three chapters and can't wait to see what happens next.

Nuff said!

I want chapter 3, pronto! I loved the story line

This is the best story ever great find

I love the genuine dialogue in this story. Also the circumstance is really interesting and I love the lead up this is taking. It seems like this is gonna be a great read!