by GillieChattan
you lost me with her begging to be ass fucked... just not realistic or believable. I know it's fiction, but you started off with something wishfully plausible and then went off the rails... Hope your next effort is soon though!
If she wants it in the ass, it's because shes already "toy'd" with the idea.
I can see how it could happen, two naked people caught up in a wild activity that unleashes uncontrolable lust.
I'd give it a try.
I enjoyed your story and look forward to future works.
Keep it comming however stick to a theme and not go off on a tangent like having her being fucked in the ass . not very realistic