All Comments on 'Collisions Ch. 04'

knew that prick was up to no good, and i reckon oscar burst thru' the door to see lil bob served up by mellie huh?? lol

of course the poor mexicano va a ser accused of the abuse, hopefully Mellie's parents will pull their prejudiced heads out of their asses. Go Oscar!

Awesome story, I love how u make each character sound so real. When are you going to post the next chapter?!

plz right more wait to read more

Please, finish chapter 5! I liked the storyline and the characters.

I like this story as well, please carry it on!!!!!

Where is the next chapter???

i want to read more about oscar and mellie finding each other and realizing their love together.

I want to read more of the story.

Add another chapter to this one please, explaining what happened! I hate being left on a cliffhanger.