All Comments on 'Riley's Bar Ch. 05'

by Just Plain Bob

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C_frommnC_frommnabout 14 years ago
Finally

Elaine and Do Process will be interesting to see where everything goes from Here. They can only throw him in jail and Hold him for so long before letting him Loose at least he wont have to worry about hurting anyones Feelings.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
An interesting development

Well he sure as hell won't have to decide who he's going to fuck now.

A really good full story. A lot of background that makes the characters come to life. Well done and thanks for the good read.

bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Good Story

Our hero was snatched from the horns of dilemma, by the long arm of

the Law!

KoreavetKoreavetabout 14 years ago
Wheels within wheels

I think we have two different stories jammed together. That may be why the editing slipped.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
Well That was interesting.

Let's see where this heads. And what dilemas this predicament brings up an and what happens to the problem on the 23!

Thanks for writing

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Another 1*

Except for the last several sentences all it was is more boring bar relationships that add nothing to the story.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 10 years ago
Damn

You know up until the last line of the tale it was becoming a soap opera but now my curiosity is peaked. I have an idea what the future holds but I won't speculate yet. Still time...

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 9 years ago

The last scene was interesting. Thanks for the offering.

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
Hows that old saying go?

Rob's not going to fuck anyone,

cause in jail,

he's the one who gets fucked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well it took them long enough to catch up with him!

Guess that solves his friday dilemma.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
IN THE MIDST OF HIS LOVING LIFE STYLE

a grinch sneaks in with a stopper, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Our old buddy Rob just keeps digging himself deeper and deeper. I know, though, that if I were Rob I would run, not walk, away from that proposed MMF thing. I know I’m paranoid but that still sounds like some deranged husband’s plan to lure the wife’s boyfriend in and pop them both. Keep it coming, JPB.

whateverittakeswhateverittakesover 2 years ago

At least now he's got a pretty good excuse...

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 1 year ago

why are these in LW

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