by PrevertOne
Just joking, of course. It gave more than one good chuckle and for that, I thank you.
Congratulations. Funny and erotic are difficult to incorporate successfully into a story but you did. The bonus for us readers is we get additional chapters. My current and future thanks.
Dude, you managed to capture the exact mental imagery i had after watching that movie Creepshow 2 when i was a teenager, and every "Blob"movie ever made. I had fantasies for months after watching those movies that revolved around these very images you captured in your writing. FANTASTIC JOB!!! I cannot wait to read anything else concerning this story.